Derisive: My mother give me a derisive that makes me fell upset.
Derisive: My mother give me a derisive look that makes me fell upset. "New"
Edible: Some crabs are poisoness, some of them are edible.
Edible: Some crabs are poison that we can't eat, some of them aren't poison that is edible. "New"
Fathom: The students try to fathom what teacher is trying to say.
Fathom: What teacher is trying to say makes the students difficult to Fathom. "New"
Hordes: Hordes of students were lined up next to the bus.
Hordes: Hordes of students were sitting in the bus. "New"
My mother give me a derisive look that makes me fell upset. (1 spelling mistake in a verb, and make them past tense)
ReplyDeleteSome crabs are poison that we can't eat, some of them aren't poison that is edible. (Use conjunctions to make your idea clear. Use this as a model. Some students are lazy AND the teacher has to punish them, AND some students work hard and the teacher should reward them.
What teacher is trying to say makes the students difficult to Fathom (this is the opposite of what you want to say. Look at this instead and tell me what the difference is. What the teacher is trying to say is difficult for the students to fathom)
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