New Narrator - New Narrative

             My own point of view was that if I could change the setting  on the ocean. Timothy and Phillip stuck in the middle of the ocean, the thing they only have was a boat with no gasoline, fish pole, fishing sphere and some little food and water. The same event would appear in my point of view was that Timothy would died, but Phillip could see anything and Timothy died because when they are fishing for food Phillip shoot the sphere to Timothy and Timothy died. Before he breathe one left, he said that he won't blame on Phillip and order Phillip to eat his all body so he won't be hungry, so Phillip survive a few days. When he was rescued, the police ask him that where is Timothy, he said :" I ate him, because he said he could let me eat him.", but the police won't believe. Then Phillip was rescue and become prisoner.

Lot of Homework Versus No homework

             If a school gave student a lot of homework, the student would not ablt to finish on time, sometimes it took away free time turns out you need to do homework on Saturday and Sunday. You would also be tired because you always finish your homework at 12:00, it make you unhealthy. The only good thing that write a lot of homework was you study more.
              If a school gave student no homework, the student could have free time during Saturday and Sunday. If you had no homework, you could meet your parents more. You could also sleep well on the day, you won't have pressure of lot of homework. The teacher could be happy too, because they don't have to keep grading homework. It turns out students had happy day, but it makes students don't care about classwork. They would not understand what the teacher is saying. The parents would also had problem that their children is too free at home.
              At the end, my suggestion was that teacher  could give a little homework, because if it too muck, makes people unhealthy, no homework make people to flunk.

Greek Mythology

             My most memorable story was the story about Medusa, because she was very cool and evil. She was a beautiful girl, but the other girl jealous about her beauty, so they turn her in to stone. Percy cut off Medusa's head to kill the sea monster. I like the story because it really cool if you could turn people into stones by looking at that person. Her head could also be a deadly weapon. In the story, they had different looking of Medusa, some Medusa has snakes hair and body with bows and arrows with them. Some are just human body snaky hair and deadly eyes. For now on the character Medusa were made into many story and movie.

Racism

             I think racism means some people prejudice someone because they believe in some kind of stuff. In the story, The Cay Phillip believe that black people are poor and bad, so he had racism to Timothy. For me if I was discriminated against by someone. I don't really care what he said, but if he hurt me I would punch that person in the face. If they were bigger than me, I wouldn't care about it. Unless if the hurt me.

New Narrtor-New Narrative

             If the story was telling by the Timothy, the conversation in the story would be different written, because Timothy has different a west Indian accent and it would be hard to read. In the story, he said " Twas off d'shore, Phill-eep. " Tis back now. An' our luck is change." that show the accent and his point of view of the how lucky he is. If the story change, I would think the story would be less prejudice in the story because Timothy was good to Phillip.

Consider This....

             Question: "He does not really like me, or he would have taken me along. He was different." Why does Timothy leave Phillip behind when he goes to the reef for the first time? Why is Phillip so quick to misinterpret Timothy's behavior? What do you think causes people to feel prejudice against others, as Phillip feels toward timothy.

              Answer: Timothy leave Phillip behind when he goes to reef for the first time because he think it too dangerous that let Phillip to go with him. Phillip so quick to misinterpret Timothy's behavior because Phillip think black people are bad, so he think that Timothy don't like him. It feel sad that people prejudice against others, and I was upset that why Phillip prejudice Timothy. Especially Timothy was helping Phillip to get rescue. I think people can't prejudice each others. I would be friend of Timothy if I am Phillip because Phillip was blind on the island, everything was prepared by Timothy. Phillip didn't do anything, so my attitude to Timothy would be nice and thankful.

Topic vs. Theme

             The theme of 'The Highwayman was to do what you promise. The highwayman said " Look for me by moonlight; Watch for me by moonlight; I'll come to thee by moonlight, though hell should bar the way! He promise the landlord's daughter Bess, that he would come back, but Tim told the soldier that the highwayman would come back. The soldiers got in landlord's house, kill the landlord and tie up Bess. They were ready to capture the highwayman. Then Bess shoot herself. She want to warn the highwayman, but highwayman died at the end. This is how the highwayman did what he promise to Bess.

Your Job

             The first thing I do when I arrived to school. I would take out the book and get ready for my first class. My job in school was to study and learn new stuff. Then I would put the homework in one folder. Those homework that need to turn in for today's class. Before I went to my first class. I would put all the book in my backpack that I have class today, so I won't be late for class because trying to find my textbook. In most of my class, I would take out the certain class book and also put my homework on top of it, so when teacher need you to turn in the certain homework, you don't have to dump all the book out to find that homework. This is for all the class.

Living in the Heart

             I think living in the heart it mean to be nice and kind in life time. I think it better live in heart because if you live in mind, you actually doesn't know what to do. You do something base on your mind, but if you live your heart. You have your own chose  and have own ideas in your life. You won't afraid anything. You would also be kind to people too. You couldn't live without your heart, you would died. If people had no heart, they usually very mean to people.

Helping Freinds

             One time I was in my grandmother's house and met my cousin Steven and Johnson. My aunt asked me that if I could help them with English, so I agreed. My cousin only came back during some days, so it hard to meet them, but I got this chance that I could meet them everyday. My aunt gave me a English book and tell me to teach them read. It nice that we sometimes play a little and we made a fun study hall. My cousin could come to my house if I help them study. I would want to help them again, because sometimes I would show them some video that is read in English, but they couldn't understand, so I would want to help them until they could speak and listen to English will

I wish that I could

             I wish that I could be a tree, because I love to sit under a tree and eat lunch. The trees could cool me down from the high temperature outside. When I was in first grade, I have a tree that I like and sit in the shadow and eat my lunch. Even if my lunch tasted bad, I would still feel happy. Sometimes I would invite my friend to sit and their eat lunch with me. He would always go away first because he felt bored, but I didn't. I would sit there until my lunch was finished, even if sometimes a leaf would fall in my lunch box, I would just pick it up and keep eating. I would like to be a famous tree, because famous trees won't be cut down; they are kind of like a country's tree, I would stand in one place forever until I died.

Short Story

       Today the teacher is going to take us to a forest to study. A horde of students were lined up after the bus. When we got there, the teacher start to fathom us some weird plant and which plant is edible. We see one stranger giving us a derisive look at us. We ran away from him. At the end of the day, we receding from the forest and go home. At night I still think about the stranger.

The Person I know the most

             The person I know the most was my cousin Steven. He was about third grades, so he like to blame someone for something. I liked to play with him because he liked to share some funny things with me and we both laughed. I always taught him some basketball skills and he learned it very soon. He has a brother named Johnson he was in fifth grade and he was taller than me, but the bad things was that he didn't like to play basketball, I don't really got along with Johnson. I believed that one day Steven would play better than Johnson. Steven and Johnson lived in China because his dads jobs, so they only came back during the vacation. Sometimes I got angry because Steven done something really bad, so I yelled at him, but we still friends. He might be my best friend and I hope he didn't have to go to China.

My memorable experience

My most memorable experience was that day I came to school during the vocation. When I came to the school, I couldn't see anyone. I felt very proud that I was the first one. After that I started to felt worried because the class has started already even the teacher wasn't here. Later on a teacher came in the classroom and ask me why came in school. I told her that today we needed to come to school, when I figure out the truth, I was embarrassed and my face was a ripe tomato, so I went home immediately.When I got home, my sister laughed at me like I was a clown. Then I ran into my room a take a nape, hoping that my classmates and teachers wouldn't laugh at me like a crazy person.

My personal hamburger

             I love to eat hamburgers. I want to make a hamburgers by myself. I name it Ken's burger. My hamburgers have many layer. It has bread, melting cheese, patty, chicken legs, turkey, chicken winds, pig legs, fries, maple sauce, spicy sauces and some salt. I always eat it with some milk of juice.

My Crazy Chinese New Year. 2009

             Did you ever play with fireworks when you were young? Hopefully you played safety with it. One Time my cousin played a dangerous game with fireworks. He is a crazy guy and he likes to play dangerous games and show-off, so I hate him. I always tried to get him in trouble, but he always succeed blaming someone else he was a really good at it, one time he even did something wrong and he blamed his grandpa.

       

        It happened at my grandmother’s house, it was Chinese New Year, so he was allowed to play with fireworks. At first he was acting well in front of his parents, but then all the parents went to eat. He went crazy and took a bag of frogs from his back pack. He started blowing frogs up with fireworks. The frog’s blood went over his body and all over the place. Later on his friends arrived too. They also blow up frogs. It made the entire place dirty and smelly. I wanted to join them but they wouldn’t let me, they said only friends could play. Then I got so frustrated, that I went in the house and told all the parents to come out and see what they were doing.

        Finally, the world was peaceful. They got grounded and couldn’t play any fireworks unless I say they could. I finally got him in trouble and I look in charge of the fireworks. My cousin and his friend had to stay and clean the blood. They did not get any red envelope for rest of the year and I got theirs, so I got double. This was the best Chinese New Year ever in my life.

My most memorable person

            My most memorable person is my cousin. I hate him so much. He liked to do dangerous things.One time he spill hot water on his pets and kill them with fireworks. He doesn't like to wear clothes and pants. He is always naked at home, so I always stay away from him. He is my memorable person, because he is always doing something funny and silly. One time he ran home because a lot of dogs were chasing him, he stole something from neighbor and he bit by the house dog. Sometimes he do something that almost harm something. He played fireworks and nearly blew up the car, he fed the dog chocolate, he killed my pet. When he done something bad, I hope he would disappear, when he does something funny, I hope people will laugh at him.

English 7: Vocabulary Word Sentence Corretion

Derisive: My mother give me a derisive that makes me fell upset.

Derisive: My mother give me a derisive look that makes me fell upset. "New"

Edible: Some crabs are poisoness, some of them are edible.

Edible: Some crabs are poison that we can't eat, some of them aren't poison that is edible.  "New"

Fathom: The students try to fathom what teacher is trying to say.

Fathom: What teacher is trying to say makes the students difficult to Fathom. "New"

Hordes: Hordes of students were lined up next to the bus.

Hordes: Hordes of students were sitting in the bus. "New"